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Required Element

Example

Slogan with alliteration

Crystal Lake - the clear choice for family fun

Proper adjectives capitalized

Mexican, Chinese, American

Sound that might be heard in your city (onomatopoeia)

Buzz, splash, chirp

Sensory

Details/ simile/ metaphor/personification

Sensory details: cool water (touch); rocking notes from guitars (sound); many visual examples: smell of freshly baked bread; simile calls like a siren; metaphor (sounds) are background music for town; personification friendly town.

Dialogue with proper punctuation

All checked and corrected as needed

Proper nouns properly punctuated

Crystal Lakers, Crystal Lake High School, Royal Cardinals, Amy’s Antiques, Chamber of Commerce

Possessive nouns with proper use of apostrophe

Crystal Lake’s Mayor, town’s streets

All words checked for correct spelling

All checked and corrected as needed